My Robot Is Pregnant theme song!

tough guy poetry and manly stories of loneliness
all contents copyright Jon Rolston 2004, 2005, 2006

August 29, 2006

this is a poem:

apples baseballs bananas

3 Comments

  1. What is, “Things that look like male anatomy?”

    Comment by e. march — September 1, 2006 @ 6:16 pm

  2. It is supposed to make your brain go “round things” then go , “no, fruit”. Either way your brain tries to lump all three together. I thought it would leave people feeling like something was left out. You solved the puzzle – I hadn’t been thinking that myself.

    Also, I like that each word has at least one set of double consanants. There is a lot of things structurally similar with these three words. But say each “A” by itself. There are at least four different sounding “A”‘s in those three words.

    I am back in school now.

    Comment by jon — September 4, 2006 @ 9:02 am

  3. yeah…I dug those words, myself. I kept coming back to this poem because I really liked the syntax/way the words looked together. Then my mind [of course] went down “pervy lane”…thus the anatomy correlation.

    Comment by e. march — September 5, 2006 @ 4:12 am

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