Comments on: this is a poem:

By: e. march

e. march — Tue, 05 Sep 2006 12:12:46 +0000

yeah…I dug those words, myself. I kept coming back to this poem because I really liked the syntax/way the words looked together. Then my mind [of course] went down “pervy lane”…thus the anatomy correlation.

By: jon

jon — Mon, 04 Sep 2006 17:02:37 +0000

It is supposed to make your brain go “round things” then go , “no, fruit”. Either way your brain tries to lump all three together. I thought it would leave people feeling like something was left out. You solved the puzzle – I hadn’t been thinking that myself.

Also, I like that each word has at least one set of double consanants. There is a lot of things structurally similar with these three words. But say each “A” by itself. There are at least four different sounding “A”‘s in those three words.

I am back in school now.

By: e. march

e. march — Sat, 02 Sep 2006 02:16:32 +0000

What is, “Things that look like male anatomy?”